It is an excellent revision and has addressed all the important points and more. I must also compliment you on your fluid and interesting writing style. It makes for very nice reading.
(In fact, this review of Keynes’ book is my first publication in this journal. This irrelevant point of information reminds me of an equally unimportant but enjoyable discussion Andrew Gelman and I had in the IHP cafeteria last year about the merits of publishing in new journals… )
Incidentally, I needed a caption for the picture of Keynes I had included in the paper (a public domain picture taken at the inaugural meeting of the IMF’s board of governors in 1946). Since I had used the picins LaTeX package to obtain pictures within the text rather than figures, I tried the \piccaption command but kept getting the text of the caption interfering with the image. After trying for half an hour to calibrate \parpic multiple parameters, to use all options of \piccaptionoutside, &tc., I resorted to basics by adding via gimp a white band at the bottom of the original picture. I wish I could have included the other pictures of Keynes I had found on the Internet, especially the paintings by Duncan Grant, but getting the permissions proved impossible….